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 依赖约束规范：各类扩展插件仅依赖抽象接口，严禁直接依赖 `dsh-agent-loop`（该主循环支持替换实现）；唯一允许的特例是组合包 `dsh-agent-spine-demo`，它的职责是组装整套实体主干。
 
-> This document covers **behavior**; type shapes live in [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md), the per-event/service reference in the generated regions of [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md), per-package contracts in the package READMEs ([map](../../packages/README.md)).
+> This document covers **behavior**; type definitions live in [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md), the per-event/service reference lives in the generated regions of [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md), and package contracts in the package READMEs state each package's required configuration and behavior ([map](../../packages/README.md)).
 
-本文档描述整体行为逻辑；类型定义存放于 [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md)；各类事件、服务的详细参考见 [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md) 中的生成区块；各包（package）的对外约定写在相应的 README 中（[索引](../../packages/README.md)）。
+本文档描述整体行为逻辑；类型定义存放于 [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md)；各类事件、服务的详细参考见 [subsystems/](../subsystems/core.md) 中的生成区块；相应的 README 说明每个包（package）要求的配置和行为（[索引](../../packages/README.md)）。
 
 ## ② 防御模式规则
 
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 自带自动跳过逻辑，仅用于保障无密钥 CI 环境、无权限贡献者不会被流程拦截，不代表可以以此为由削减真实接口测试投入。
 
-> **Prefer the real implementation over a mock** — Mock only the genuinely expensive or non-deterministic boundary (the LLM adapter, the network, the clock); keep everything downstream real. A hand-rolled stand-in proves the bridge moves bytes, not that the shipping tool behaves as asserted — the two drift while the test stays green.
+> **Prefer the real implementation over a mock** — Mock only genuinely expensive or non-deterministic dependencies (the LLM adapter, the network, the clock); keep everything downstream real. A hand-rolled stand-in proves the bridge moves bytes, not that the shipping tool behaves as asserted — the two drift while the test stays green.
 
-**优先使用真实实现，而非 mock 替身**——仅对开销极大、结果不确定的边界模块做 mock（LLM（大语言模型）适配器、网络、时钟），其余下游组件全部使用真实实现。手写的 mock 替身只能验证数据通路能传输字节，无法保证线上工具符合预期逻辑；长期下来业务逻辑与 mock 实现会出现偏差，但测试仍会显示通过。
+**优先使用真实实现，而非 mock 替身**——仅对开销极大、结果不确定的依赖做 mock（LLM（大语言模型）适配器、网络、时钟），其余下游组件全部使用真实实现。手写的 mock 替身只能验证数据通路能传输字节，无法保证线上工具符合预期逻辑；长期下来业务逻辑与 mock 实现会出现偏差，但测试仍会显示通过。
 
 ## ④ 机制描述
 
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 ## ⑤ 政策声明
 
-> The gate's limit, stated plainly: a green gate means the pair was confirmed consistent at these exact contents, not that the confirmation was sound. It checks hashes and shape; it cannot judge whether the two sides actually say the same thing — that is the reviewer's half of the contract. A re-recorded pair with a sloppy counterpart passes the gate; it must not pass review.
+> The gate's limit, stated plainly: a green gate means the pair was confirmed consistent at these exact contents, not that the confirmation was sound. It checks hashes and Markdown structure; it cannot judge whether the two sides actually say the same thing — that is the reviewer's half of the contract. A re-recorded pair with a sloppy counterpart passes the gate; it must not pass review.
 
-门禁的边界很明确：通过门禁只说明两侧文件当前的 blob hash 与伴随记录吻合，并且结构签名一致，也就是说，这组内容曾被确认一致；它不代表这次确认可靠。门禁无法判断两种语言是否真正表达了相同的意思；这部分约定要由评审人把关。即使译文粗糙、表意有误，重新记录配对后仍能通过门禁，但绝不能通过人工评审。
+门禁的限制很明确：通过门禁只说明两侧文件当前的 blob hash 与伴随记录吻合，并且 Markdown 结构签名一致，也就是说，这组内容曾被确认一致；它不代表这次确认可靠。评审人必须检查两种语言是否真正表达了相同的意思。即使译文粗糙、表意有误，重新记录配对后仍能通过门禁，但绝不能通过人工评审。
 
 ## ⑥ Agent Note 论证
 
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 - 长段按语义单元拆段，一段一件事；名词短语展开为动词句。
 - 母语重写不等于删减：原文每个语义成分都要落地。
 - 样例与 [terminology.md](terminology.md) 冲突时，以术语表为准：收录样例前按表修正术语（例如 agent、mock、LLM 保留英文，cancellation 译「取消」）。
-- 代码体标识符（事件名 `agent/status`、状态值 `running`、包名 `dsh-bash-local` 等）在译文中保留 code span 原文，不得口语化改写——这是行文规则的硬边界，Pass 2 逐句核验的重点。
+- 代码体标识符（事件名 `agent/status`、状态值 `running`、包名 `dsh-bash-local` 等）在译文中保留 code span 原文，不得口语化改写；Pass 2 必须逐句核验。